We're better together

 do we need approval

 from anyone of our love?  

 it can't be far off the mark

 we're just two lovers 

In love's sweet embrace 

as one spirit In the dark 

the world doesn't exist

I care not what they think 

we can't be weighed down

when we fill each other's bliss

and from cupid's cup we drink

when you know it's

just we two

free to follow a future bright

our soul mate bond so true

sublime entry into the light? 

and if we choose forever

intense lovers are you and me

eternity sings were better together

'tis a love which was meant to be

Reviews

[Vari]

Sun in other's day, the wind in other's sky, the waves in other's ocean and the beat in other's heart... Thinking of each other! Pair of lovers is a pair of eyes that never tired of looking at each other, lyrics to each other, closing each other, in the light and dark and two books, writing and reading each other, without ever interchanging the pages. Gives me lots of emotions flooding in thoughts. Enjoyable and lovely poem :) made me think of someone simply a masterpiece Marie :)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Vari
for the grand
review on my
poetry ..yes
two lovers
like writing
and reading
each other
right on;

[Ankita Dwivedi]

Love has no religion , no language .. it's so pious and sacred ... a feeling that burns in too herats in a way that makes them more whole , fulfilled and new ....Lovely write ..
Love, Ankita

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Ankita;
so very much
appreciate your
kind review;

[Just Kim]

kind of an emotional read, expressed so well

[Fran Marie]

Thanks for stopping
by to read..
much appreciate;

[Just Kim]

not a problem.....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

listen to eternity, ignore those soothsayers who won't oblige a love
that seems to good to be true.
j.

[Fran Marie]

eternity
sounds good
thanks for your
kind review Jacob;
I s o appreciate;

[AJNJ]

The world ceases to matter and nothing can come in the way if two hearts want to beat together. There's nothing like two people who mean the world to each other. Its a beautiful thing....

[Fran Marie]

thanks A J for
your kind review
I. s o appreciate it;

[AJNJ]

Its my pleasure Ms. Fran !

[Chris Shaw]

Only you and him will know if it:s the big deal. Only you knows how he makes you feel. It doesn't matter a jot what anyone else thinks. I say go for it. Life is too short for procrastination. Nicely penned Fran Marie.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Chris
for your kind
words..much
appreciate it;