`Magic Memories`

 

` Magic Memories`

 

~Sonnet~

I never knew the worth of memories
depended on sharing moments with you
whence in our youth ,'twas merry revelry
syncronized soulmates~ lovers, just we two
Little had I known,mem'ries were forming
for future reminecsing in my mind
breathing jasmine scents of insense burning
savoring kisses 'neath moonlight divine
Afternoons brought delight and frolicking
and magic merged with a playful faced sun
no fallen-lonely raindrops for sulking
each new day, we'd salute in sinful fun
Now, I know well the worth of those days gone
'tis paintings of magic mem'ries to which I hold on

Reviews

[Imperfection]

This one made me a little sad.

Unfortunately, we have to lose things/people to know their worth.
I loved the title of this poem so.... much.

Memories are magic, indeed.
I'd never thought of it that way until I read it here. They make you sad, they make you happy, sometimes they're all that keeps you alive.

Brilliant write.

[EmpressPoetess]

Enchanting sonnet, Fran! deeply emotional and so well written, even if the content is sad.

[Rambling Prose]

This beautifully penned sonnet is magical indeed. I love the phraseology you used as it brushed picturesque images across a blank canvas, which my mind's eye readily embraced.

~a delightful read~

[Rainbowco]

Beautiful.

[SM Davis]

beautiful!! I think perhaps maybe the word is sulking rather than saulking? Of course I'm no master of the english language ... this is beautiful. Simply gorgeous in it's soft romantic whimpers of a love shared between two people.