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Falling for you

Falling for you

A Poem by Fran Marie

enthralled by your charm
enslaved by your power force
captive by your love

© 2021 Fran Marie


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First word, I think you might mean "enthralled" . . . (?) Since your poem conveys a forceful taking-over of his love force, I'm thinking of a more dynamic title: "Being Arrested By You" . . . or maybe the opposite direction: "Surrendering to You" . . . Sophisticated word choices to build a powerful statement about this love force! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

Thanks Margie for
catching that
you are correct
my bad ..and here
I thou.. read more



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dear Fran... the Charm of being drawn to a lover
to discover the pleasure of power... gently, Pat

Posted 9 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

9 Months Ago

Thanks dear Pat
for stopping by

always appreciate
your kind review sread more
Sometimes love comes charging in and refuses to leave

Posted 9 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

9 Months Ago

that's true
thanks so
much for reading
I s o appreciate it
Nice piece, I like the three line of it.

Posted 11 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

11 Months Ago

Thanks Crosby
for your kind
review; I appreciate
it;
No wasted words dear Fran. When love is near. We are alive and well. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for love.
Coyote

Posted 12 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

12 Months Ago

Thanks dear John
so vey much I
for your kind words;
Coyote Poetry

11 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Fran.
First word, I think you might mean "enthralled" . . . (?) Since your poem conveys a forceful taking-over of his love force, I'm thinking of a more dynamic title: "Being Arrested By You" . . . or maybe the opposite direction: "Surrendering to You" . . . Sophisticated word choices to build a powerful statement about this love force! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

Thanks Margie for
catching that
you are correct
my bad ..and here
I thou.. read more
This is a wonderful Haiku

Posted 1 Year Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

thanks Kim..and
Happy New Year
Just Kim

1 Year Ago

happy new year to you as well

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Added on December 31, 2020
Last Updated on January 14, 2021

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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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