Falling for you

Falling for you

A Poem by Fran Marie

enthralled by your charm
enslaved by your power force
captive by your love

© 2021 Fran Marie


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First word, I think you might mean "enthralled" . . . (?) Since your poem conveys a forceful taking-over of his love force, I'm thinking of a more dynamic title: "Being Arrested By You" . . . or maybe the opposite direction: "Surrendering to You" . . . Sophisticated word choices to build a powerful statement about this love force! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

5 Months Ago

Thanks Margie for
catching that
you are correct
my bad ..and here
I thou.. read more



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dear Fran... the Charm of being drawn to a lover
to discover the pleasure of power... gently, Pat

Posted 1 Month Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

Thanks dear Pat
for stopping by

always appreciate
your kind review sread more
Sometimes love comes charging in and refuses to leave

Posted 1 Month Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

that's true
thanks so
much for reading
I s o appreciate it
Nice piece, I like the three line of it.

Posted 3 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Months Ago

Thanks Crosby
for your kind
review; I appreciate
it;
No wasted words dear Fran. When love is near. We are alive and well. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for love.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

Thanks dear John
so vey much I
for your kind words;
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Fran.
First word, I think you might mean "enthralled" . . . (?) Since your poem conveys a forceful taking-over of his love force, I'm thinking of a more dynamic title: "Being Arrested By You" . . . or maybe the opposite direction: "Surrendering to You" . . . Sophisticated word choices to build a powerful statement about this love force! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

5 Months Ago

Thanks Margie for
catching that
you are correct
my bad ..and here
I thou.. read more
This is a wonderful Haiku

Posted 5 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

5 Months Ago

thanks Kim..and
Happy New Year
Just Kim

5 Months Ago

happy new year to you as well

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Added on December 31, 2020
Last Updated on January 14, 2021

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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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