Falling for you

enthralled by your charm

enslaved by your power force

captive by your love

Reviews

[barleygirl]

First word, I think you might mean "enthralled" . . . (?) Since your poem conveys a forceful taking-over of his love force, I'm thinking of a more dynamic title: "Being Arrested By You" . . . or maybe the opposite direction: "Surrendering to You" . . . Sophisticated word choices to build a powerful statement about this love force! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Margie for
catching that
you are correct
my bad ..and here
I thought I knew
how to spell haha
I m not too keen
on the title myself
(falling for) is so
commonplace not
a very exciting word
don't like surrender
either.its.trite also
hmm I'll have to
think about a more
interesting word all
suggestions welcome
"name that poem" lol

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Fran... the Charm of being drawn to a lover
to discover the pleasure of power... gently, Pat

[Fran Marie]

Thanks dear Pat
for stopping by

always appreciate
your kind review sread moreThanks dear Pat
for stopping by

always appreciate
your kind review s

[Poetic Beauty]

Sometimes love comes charging in and refuses to leave

[Fran Marie]

that's true
thanks so
much for reading
I s o appreciate it

[Crosby Idasa]

Nice piece, I like the three line of it.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Crosby
for your kind
review; I appreciate
it;

[Coyote Poetry]

No wasted words dear Fran. When love is near. We are alive and well. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for love.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

Thanks dear John
so vey much I
for your kind words;

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Fran.

[Just Kim]

This is a wonderful Haiku

[Fran Marie]

thanks Kim..and
Happy New Year

[Just Kim]

happy new year to you as well