so long 2020

so long 2020

A Poem by Fran Marie

the last leaf I found
lie quite dead upon the ground
never more around

© 2021 Fran Marie


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Here in California where winter afternoons are often up to 70*, the trees don't lose their leaves until well into Jan or Feb, while at the same time sprouting new buds, soon-to-be leaves. Love how you use the symbol of "last dead leaf" to suggest that hopefully the chuff will soon puff off! Here's to a bright new year enjoying more of your writing! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

5 Months Ago

Quite different
In Kentucky our
trees are bare
to the bark
no budding u.. read more



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The year 2020 will be the year of many things. I just hope things can only go up as the years go on.

Posted 4 Months Ago


I am glad 2020 is gone. I pray 2021 is better. Here in Michigan. Lose the leaves in October. We know Winter is here. Very nice use of words dear Fran.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


Though short poem, lines are powerful. Good work

Posted 5 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

Thanks Arundass
so vey much..
i appreciate;
So long and good riddance! We'll all turn a new leaf over in 2021

Posted 5 Months Ago


Here in California where winter afternoons are often up to 70*, the trees don't lose their leaves until well into Jan or Feb, while at the same time sprouting new buds, soon-to-be leaves. Love how you use the symbol of "last dead leaf" to suggest that hopefully the chuff will soon puff off! Here's to a bright new year enjoying more of your writing! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

5 Months Ago

Quite different
In Kentucky our
trees are bare
to the bark
no budding u.. read more


........................ Made me shiver in the New Year ..........warmly, I might add .............

Posted 5 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

5 Months Ago

Thanks Neville ever
s o much..i appreciate;
Neville

5 Months Ago


........................ more than welcome
Let's hope there are trees that will offer a more safer and prosperous bounty in the new year.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

5 Months Ago

"hope springs eternal"
looking forward to a
green spring season
thanks and
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and the new leaves of 2021 just waiting to emerge.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

5 Months Ago

yes yes they are
thanks for reading;
Happy New Year Jacob

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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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