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Towering
Have you ever fallen in love with a house? Have you ever fallen in love with your own drafted dream mansion?
Maybe

Maybe

A Poem by Fran Marie

my kisses may excite you
my love may ignite you 
yet, my will may fight you
 
your eyes may undress me
your arms may caress me
yet, your will may arrest me

my desires will warm you 
my emotions will harm you
still..my words will warn you

your dreams will enfold me
your heart will scold me
still..your words will behold me

© 2021 Fran Marie


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Interesting device in this one. In the first three verses the last line seems to contradict the sentiments of the preceding two. It is as though a come on is counterbalanced by a warning. In the last verse, though, the message seems to say the risk is worth it. Perhaps that is the truth about all relationships.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

thanks John
I know this
kinda reads
like a riddle
but I can tell
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Love the contradiction in this poem. When we live with someone and spend many years with that person there are times that we drive each other crazy and sometimes say unkind words we don’t really mean.

A tale of most lovers here. Very relatable

Posted 3 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Months Ago

love is complicated
at best it's never easy
going at all times
there's always .. read more
Poetic Beauty

3 Months Ago

You a welcome
Wow, heartfelt poem. Every line addresses one thing; and that is real Love

Posted 4 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

Thanks Crosby
so vey much
appreciate your
kind review;
I think this is a perfect description of love with all it's passion and messiness too. Not necessarily a warning, just an acceptance of reality. There is a shadow in our love relationships as well as in our psyches. I think you have expressed this brilliantly and it is refreshing to read a love poem that embraces the good as well as the bad.

Posted 4 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

yes, love just
like everything
else has its ups
and downs the
good parts.. read more
This is wonderful poetry for love wonder.
"your dreams will enfold me
your heart will scold me
still..your words will behold me"
I loved the above lines and I do believe. Women decide if love or not. Thank you dear Fran for sharing the outstanding poetry. You said everything needed in the words.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

Thanks John for
your kind words
on m y poetry
I appreciate
it ever so m.. read more
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Fran.
Nicely clever wordplay! I love when a love poem reflects the true ambivalence that many experience. Love is never straightforward. If not for such cliffhangers as you lay out here, love would not be such an irresistible rollercoaster to write about. You make love sound irresistible with strong rhyme & rhythm (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

thanks Margie
s o right on
love is so fickled
who can ever figure
it out.. read more
I love you’re writing, it perfectly flows together. :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

Thanks Lilcupcake
how nice of
you to say..im
glad you liked
and I apprec.. read more
Lildeadcupcake

4 Months Ago

You’re welcome. :)
Interesting device in this one. In the first three verses the last line seems to contradict the sentiments of the preceding two. It is as though a come on is counterbalanced by a warning. In the last verse, though, the message seems to say the risk is worth it. Perhaps that is the truth about all relationships.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

thanks John
I know this
kinda reads
like a riddle
but I can tell
.. read more
I'm not sure if you are saying, beware of me I'm dangerous.
Enter at your own will.
Naturally being male that's what we do, and then it happens.

Posted 4 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

yea.. enter at
your own risk
and it surely
does happen
thanks Paul
.. read more
Beautiful.... really enjoyable write.

Posted 4 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

Thanks s o much
light;
light and ashes

4 Months Ago

You're welcome.
There is love here, but it has a sharp edge to it.An incy wincy hint of danger. Great read Fran Marie. Hope you are keeping safe and well dear poet. All good wishes.

Chris

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

Thanks dear Chris
for reading and the
kind review; all is well
here: wishing yo.. read more

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