After the Rain

Senryu

             you're still in my arms

        the afterglow there remains

              our rainbow of love

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

hi Fran
i sometimes pick writes for the title, now I hate rain being homeless rain not good, one gets wet, no where to go and you're lonely, but what great hope the aftermath on the other side of the rainbow there someone you can hug with love. thank you for sharing.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Mauricio; so true the sun shines
over the rainbow with love

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle, kind and generous words shared dear Fran. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts. A amazing poem.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

Thanks dear John ;
ever so much for your kind review

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Fran.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Fran... the colors of passion... when
the slightest touch is a flower opening it's Petals
where the scent of Peonies permeate the afterglow.
gently, Pat

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Pat so very much
I appreciate;

[Orphic dreamer]

There is so much magnificence within 3 sentences. How you connected nature with love is astounding!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks s o very much
For reading ;

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Yes, though rainbow is an aftermath of a tumultuous storm, still it is worth having if it pour it's entire colour to take us another level. Short and sweet poem... Loved it

[Fran Marie]

so true ..
Thanks Dreamer Sima
I do appreciate;

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love is that rainbow that not only gets us through the storm, but lights us up afterward...and keeps the sunshine in, the sunshine in.

Nicely done.
j.

[Fran Marie]

I hair ya
thanks Jacob
s o very much

[Chris Shaw]

How lovely this senryu is Fran Marie. So much love contained in seventeen syllables. Wonderfully visual as well.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

thanks so much Chris
I appreciate it..

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

A wonderful senryu, Fran, one we could all hope to aspire to in love.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Carlos
s o very much appreciated