Love Prints

      I stumble toward you

         tripping over love's footsteps

          falling without doubt

Reviews

[tranquilspace]

Short but passed a lovely message

[Fran Marie]

Thanks tranquilspace
so much appreciated;

[Paul Bell]

Three lines of stumbling into love's embrace.
Does it get any better than that.
I take it you are wearing high heels.

[Fran Marie]

yeah.. I m so klutzy I even stumble
when barefoot thanks for reading Paul

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Tripping over love's
footsteps Oh to be
carefree and young
at heart ❤💗

Lovely inked
words ☺

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Benita so very
much for reading and your kind review;

[Coyote Poetry]

To be young and foolish dear Fran. To be able to fall into love embrace fearless and brave. I liked the way you used these words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

Thanks John for your
kind words..i so appreciate;

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Fran.

[Crowley]

The next word out of her mouth after my fall would have been..."how long the doctor say you had to wear those shoes?" Lol. Im a stumbler from wayyyyy back. Very powerful sentiment is such a compact format. Loved it!

[Fran Marie]

I'm guilty also a real klutz
especially in those darn
high heels..lol thanks Crowley

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it is good to be able to fall with trust.
Wonderful senryu here, Fran.
j.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Jacob for your kind words
I. so appreciate;

[Vertigo Cat1111]

I absolutely LOVED this. Short, but sweet and it leaves you with such a wonderful piece. I feel the strength and love and it's for sure going in my favorites. It's such a smart idea and I'm so happy you shared it! Thank you for posting this masterpiece. (:

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Colacat for your kind
words on this one. Glad you enjoyed
you

[mattavelli]

Hello, Fran! :)
This is a lovely stumble. Thanks for sharing.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks for reading Matt
I so appreciate

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful senryu here Fran Marie. Nothing better than this type of falling. Falling in love is a delight. No grazed knees when you do that.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Chris; I so
appreciate your kind words;

[Neville]

.. a very nearly also I see .. but without any doubt .. simply beautiful :)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Neville
so very dearly much;

[Neville]

you are most welcome :)