Shadow Spirits

When the winds are breathing low by the shore
Shadowy spirits rise from ocean's deep floor
Dark aspirations, obscure in my mind
Still, surface Earth's death~vivid in time

Atmosphere dense,with feelings of doom enhanced
Whence free wild winds, played tune to flower's dance
Remembering well love's fair-faced romance
Lain down beside me on beachy white sand

Scanty prayers offered, too little, too late
weary words spoken, as sofly I wait
for love's last embrace in arms I know well
and wish for a kiss to bid me farewell

Now! shadow spirits rush fast from sea's floor
When the winds are breathing low, oh so low

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

like the dark imagery in this piece alot beautiful and haunting at the same time.. nice work!!! love the ending to this alot.

[Lance]

enjoyed the read, many things are too little and too late. L

[Arthur Crow]

Beautiuflly crafted, the mood and flow was dripping with lush scenes of romance and the the sound of shadows singing sweetly.

[Emily B]

I love this, Fran. Such a Romantic scene.

[Poetic Injustice]

Haunting (ptp). Mystical. Thank you.