Unknown Destiny

An outcast adrift

downstream..

  In a wooden boat bearing

your splintered pain

    muddied waters have

anointed you

and river weeds have weaved

  knotted broken dreams

 and charted

 a dark foreboding course

many fathoms deep

while you dwell in pyramid shadows

    reflecting opaque darkness..

you see those shallow phantoms

        skimming the dull surface

             along side of

 an unknown destiny

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Well, this was fabulous! I enjoyed every word. The piece leaves this reader contemplating the destiny of all things. I mayn't know the whole story but I'm vaguely familiar with the Author. This was very well done! Bless. F.

[Miss Sharon]

Beautifully written! Although our destiny is unknown, your words give us hope for the best. ~Sharon

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Miss Sharon, for reading
much appreciated;

[jacob erin-cilberto]

our destiny is always unknown, but we can face it strongly...even when the shallow phantoms try to get into our boat.
what a hauntingly beautiful piece,
j.

[Fran Marie]

Thank you kindly Jacob
for reading..i appreciate
your kind words;