Heavenly Harmony

The sea breathes in

      shades of blue serenity

Its essence spills spiritual splendour

enthralled satisfaction

    within the core of my being

I walk barefoot on wet sandy shores

feeling gratitude

 inhaling peace

 releasing stress..

I'm not alone ~

I absorb perseverance

  a sponge soaking up contentment

I juggle daydreams into warm realities

surrounded by kinship with those

        I hold sacred bonds 

           tied in trust

lovers of the world

smooth life's struggles

               then sated ~

.heavenly harmony resides within

              my loving heart

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

How beautiful this is, Fran. "Shades of blue eternity" The ocean does seem endless looking out across it. I love anything that has to do with the sea. This was so soothing and relaxing to read it made me want to slip into my flip-flops and stroll along the sand myself. (I actually never wear flip-flops) I'll wear a pair of deck shoes. Jellyfish on the beach and all that. I very much enjoyed this.

[Fran Marie]

Thank you Fabian for reading
glad you enjoyed..i s o appreciate
your kind review..😊

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

This is beautiful poetry written with so much depth and meaning. Wonderfully penned.
"I absorb perseverance, " fave line. Tyfs

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Cyprian so very much
appreciate your kind review;

[Chris Shaw]

I always find the sea and its moods reassuring. A walk along a beach can be so therapeutic. These lines are so calming to read Fran and I really appreciated the alliteration and wonderful imagery. I haven't seen you so much on WC lately. I do hope all is well.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Thanks dear Chris for.the
kind review on my poem
all is well just been busy
spring house cleaning and
spending a great deal more
outside and spending time
with the kids and family
starting to have some nice
fair weather now....🌷😊
flowers & sunshine

[Miss Sharon]

Such a beautiful write! (I absorb perseverance a sponge soaking up contentment I juggle daydreams into warm realities) Very nice poetic prosody my dear. I love it. ~Sharon

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Sharon, so very
much for your kind review🌷

[Lisasview]

Well, Fran you are one of the very lucky ones where heavenly harmony rises in your loving heart...
If only everyone could feel that way..What a wonderful World this would be!!
Really enjoyed you words..
Lisa, now in Sunny Spain

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Lisa ;so verymuch appreciated🌷

[Lisasview]

You are so eelcome

[Lisasview]

Welcoming...,,.

[Relic]

I used to like walking on the beach until the area changed. I like the images but mostly the sentiments.

Nicely done, Fran.

[Fran Marie]

Thank you Tim
much appreciated🌷

[Patricia Wedel]

Poetry is a Bond when when sand Castles and Seagulls bring Peace to a troubled World… as 🦋 Butterflies flutter by.. 💕 peacefully… Amen… Pat

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Pat so very much
I appreciate your kind words😊

[Ken Simm.]

This snags at all sorts of feeling by using the perfect descriptive lines to conjour them

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Ken for your kind review
I s o appreciate😊

[Betty Hermelee]

Heavenly harmony resides within your heart. I love the softness and breath of fresh air about this piece. You are not alone, but instead surrounded by kinship of those you can trust; lovers of the world can can eradicate the struggles of life and keep that beautiful harmony within you.The sea is a soothing part of your contentment and serenity which reduces stress. Lovely write Fran.
Best, B

[Fran Marie]

Thank you Betty
for your kind words
much appreciated🌷

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome Fran!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am still looking to be that sponge soaking up contentment.
This poem is a step towards that.
Nicely done,
j.

[Fran Marie]

Thank you Jacob..guess I'm a bit
of an optimist in this poem.. I do
have my bad days also..😊

[John the Baptist]

Sounds like a beautiful state in which to dwell. Nice to think such states are there within us. You must have stopped reading the morning paper.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks..yeah without a doubt
I hear enough bad needs via the
media on TV and internet..