Winter's Frosted Breath

rain and snow
sought her fragile bones..drying
sleep escaped her dim eyes
night shades of blues dusted
her forgetful mind
still she never complained

a myriad of miseries hugged her
vibrations ~ blocking all hopes
trapping sunshine from entering
her humble existence..

spring daffodils no longer danced
in her world~ she, now a shadow
of herself waiting to die

with winters frosted breath

Reviews

[light and ashes]

"a myriad of miseries hugged her
vibrations.."
I've sometimes felt similarly to this poem.

[Fran Marie]

Thank you🌹

[light and ashes]

You are very welcome.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Fran... the sadness of lost love will haunt your days...
until the Spirit takes you away to whence you were created. gently, Pat p.s. I revised the ending of my review… sorry I was confused Pat

[Fran Marie]

Thank you Pat
so much appreciated🌹

[poetgurl]

Wow!! This is so very good
I loved your last stanza, this is wonderful

[Fran Marie]

Thank you so much💜

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful, honest and sad poetry shared dear Fran.
"spring daffodils no longer danced
in her world~ she, now a shadow
of herself waiting to die
with winters frosted breath"
The above lives. I loved. When Winter takes over us and we want silence. What is left? Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

Thank you so much
John..i appreciate your
kind comments on this one

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Fran.

[Ken e Bujold]

now this is poetry. An absolute stunning write

ken

[Fran Marie]

Thank you Ken🌷
for the kind review

[Sean M. Addams]

Wow a very powerful piece. Love the emotional imagery in this . Overall a very impressive write.

. Nice work

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Sean 🌷
so very much appreciated

[Sean M. Addams]

Your so welcome

[Betty Hermelee]

A sorrowful scene of someone who is dying a slow, painful death. I like your use of color to describe her condition...Sunshine being blocked so she sustains her decreasing health....and ultimately becomes a shadow of herself. her I really like how you crafted your words and your imagery to show the reader the slow decline.
Best, B

[Fran Marie]

Thank Betty for
your kind review
much appreciated

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome Fran!!!