Drenched in Verse

I dance my poetry
every line an embodiment
of emotions
mesmerizing music

splashes of ink~ 

drenched in verse

words~comforting little spirits
performing like ballerinas

reminiscing in poetic song
seems it started eons ago

art guiding my hand 

perchance to create 

another new dance in 

poetic harmony

Reviews

[Franky]

This is gorgeous poetry. I'm impressed (and humbled).

[Pete]

your words dance off the page in spiritual liberation. thanks for tripping the night fantastic ... :)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Pete for reading
I s o appreciate 🌷

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

I really liked the title and after reading the poem I felt its meaning. People often liken poetry to painting. But likening poetry to dancing is so fitting with all of its connotations, like to fighting, linking to Churchill's "bleed" quote about writing. We fight with ourselves to get it all out, don't we? Wonderfully explained and expressed poetry. tyfs

[Fran Marie]

Thank you CVD
for the kind review
I s o appreciate🌷

[Betty Hermelee]

You make poetry come alive in this piece, lots of movement to express your emotions...the colors, the flow, the ink which spills onto the page like a dancer twirling on stage....remembering those special times in the written word with a dancer in your mind's eye....harmony between art, music and poetry.
Lovely Fran!
Best, B

[Fran Marie]

Thank you Betty..
for your kind review..🌷

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Fran… your Words dance with exotic Romance… as though the rhyme could entwine with Love's Sweet Wine. Gently, Pat

[Fran Marie]

Thank you Pat for
your lovely poetic review
I so appreciate🌷

[willweb]

What a lovely dance that is a joy to be a part of. Your words bring music to life and allow the two silhouettes to move so gracefully. Beautifully done.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so much
I appreciate it

[John the Baptist]

I had long been aware of the connection of poetry and song, but somehow never linked it to dance. Here, though, we see the likening of words to "little spirits/ performing like ballerinas." And in the last verse we read of art guiding the hand to create a new dance of words. Seen this way, the creative impulse can manifest in many ways, many arts. Same muse, different presentations.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so very much

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Wonderful dance of creativity. All art comes from a single place within and throughout. They are merely siblings to one another. All in their higher forms of beauty.

[Fran Marie]

Thank you Carlos..so
much appreciate your kind words
on this one

[Temperance]

I think our muses are the artists as our intentions are often times derailed by our muses and the result is a piece of art that we did not intend yet, beautiful nonetheless. As is this poem. A beautiful poem to read. Thank you. Temp

[Fran Marie]

Thank you Temp for the
kind review..i so appreciate

[Fran Marie]

Thank you John
for the kind review🌷

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, art guides the hand, the pen, the fingers...
and art knows exactly what it wants to create through us.
love this,
j.

[Fran Marie]

yes, art is the air we poets breathe
Thanks Jacob..glad you enjoyed..