`missing you`

Senryu

 

Smoking cigarettes

 

               sipping my cappuccino

 

                          thinking thoughts of you

 

Reviews

[costa siwale]

Simple, Poetic.
Classic.
well penned

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Costa.. so much appreciated ..

[costa siwale]

of course friend, any time

[Debbie_Philly]

Amazing piece .... the picture goes really well with the write and it just flows wonderfully... loved this ! :)

[Pretty Faces Split Open]

Simple but so true

[deeps]

Love it Fran!
This is wonderful, simple and lively.
Enjoyed

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning senryu!

[Brianna Brie]

Great flow achieved without the rhyme. Superb Senryu! Thanks for entering it into the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.

[Kitty]

Beautiful!

Great poem!!!!

Josie

[Bear]

so many times I find myself doing what your poem describes ~~ no matter where I am the cigarette, caffeine combination are in hand as thoughts of those far away enter my thoughts.

Simply put your words... so true, well done.
Thanks for sharing!!
Sallie Bear