Fair Maiden Rose

Fair Maiden Rose

A Poem by Fran Marie
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Unrequited Love~Rondeau Form~

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Fair Maiden Rose sat still to pose

donned a silk sheet in lieu of clothes

He smiled with each stroke of his brush

Rose deep in thought, yet she did blush

and wondered if the artist knows

 

her envisioned love for him grows

as a handsome romantic beau

Shy, she remained in silent hush

Fair Maiden Rose

 

Charmed in his presence she arose

Slipping into her silk dress robe

as he applied the paint's last touch

his goodbye kiss revealed so much

he named the painting, she supposed

"Fair Maiden Rose"

 

 

 

 

© 2010 Fran Marie


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I like this style, I should try out the rondeau form
Nice poem based on a picture prompt, I like the little love story taking place
If I may ask, did you have a certain meter in mind for it?
Or does a rondeau have a specified meter type?
I like the reference to my name, nice one ;)
(sorry couldn't resist)
Good poem, I enjoyed it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

7 Years Ago

Thanks Beau~ glad you enjoyed this french poetry form,it's just 15 lines with fixed pattern of repet.. read more



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This is a beautifully lyrical poem with a sweet subtlety that's so much better than being forthright. Your flirty suggestive scene is simple, but with a million undertones throbbing for attention! *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reading Margie..ever so appreciated..;
aha! lovely meter, sentiment and flow. Now i want to try rondeau form as well (and i'm a bit jealous of the artist!)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Thanks so vey much
..glad you enjoyed this rondeau;.
I like this style, I should try out the rondeau form
Nice poem based on a picture prompt, I like the little love story taking place
If I may ask, did you have a certain meter in mind for it?
Or does a rondeau have a specified meter type?
I like the reference to my name, nice one ;)
(sorry couldn't resist)
Good poem, I enjoyed it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

7 Years Ago

Thanks Beau~ glad you enjoyed this french poetry form,it's just 15 lines with fixed pattern of repet.. read more
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Fran Marie light is good in this instance.. I am uninitiated when it comes to the forms of poetry but this was jolly good!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ooooo this is just gorgeous!! A very beautiful poem and I do love this form, although always find it a challenge.
The imagery is gorgeous and the poem unique and special. Loved it from start to finish!
Just the kind of thing I am looking for!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

8 Years Ago

thanks so very much;
Wow! So delicate and so tender....Lovely lines with a perfectly smooth flow...evoking romance in a pristine form...elegant and elevated...and the painting accompanying the poem is so apt... this write leaves the reader in a trance...

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is a beuatiful write I enjoyed this.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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