A Paper Heart

 

I write my heart on paper 'tis thinner than autumn leaves and these tears I cannot taper to put my mind at ease my delicate heart surrendered for a true love I wanted to share showing emotions tendered proving how much I cared I write my spirit to the winds and tho~the ink has dried my soul sealed in sadness descends for this paper heart has died

Reviews

[Nicole]

Absolutely loved. You have real talent...keep it up. Only bad thing I could say is the font made it hard to read, but that has nothing to do with the actually poem itself.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Nicole
so glad you enjoyed
I s o appreciate;

[Nicole]

no problem at all. :)

[Simbles]

my delicate heart did surrender
for a true love I wanted to share
showing emotions most tender
proving how much I care

I'm lousy with grammar but that's just how I read it.

[Fran Marie]

I like your poetic
review..very nice
thanks so vey much
for your kind words;

[Luisa König]

A very special piece of writing that totally made me emotional :)
Thank you for your special piece of writing and your submission
xx

[Aatharva Banaitkar]

The concept is very nice, the poem is really unique from others

[pvpd sri harsha]

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[Poetic Beauty]

Heart breaking and the paper thin heart is great imagery.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

heart wrenching piece...very strong feeling in this...i like the use of "taper"---

jacob

[Fran Marie]

thanks Jacob; so very much

[WindsorWolf28]

That's amazing. Amazing job.

[Fran Marie]

thanks so much for reading my poems;

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

A lovely romantic poem.
Well done.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so much