Darlin'~you're all i want

Darlin'~you're all i want

A Poem by Fran Marie

 

Santa Baby all I want is.....

I told ole Santa
    time and time again
what i truly want fer Christmas
    but, i think he don't understand
 
He brings me silly things
     like gadgets needin battries' all the time
and flannel jammies, and woolen socks
      a itchin' they drives me out of my mind
 
not to mention that stale ole fruity-tootie- cake
     he keeps putting in ma stockin'
ifen i told him once,
      i told him a dang hundered times
i wants sumthin' really rockin!
 
so i'm given' 'Ole Claus, jes one mor chance
    fer him to get it right
done told him
     Darlin',you're all i want for Christmas
and he better bring you to me come Christmas nite!
 

© 2009 Fran Marie


Author's Note

  Fran Marie
A fun write for C'mas

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It was a fun write Fran and I hope you got what you wished for. And I am wishing you a happy New Year.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


I'm glad I found this in my reading library . . . it helps extend the Christmas spirit to last all thru this week! I love your playful approach to seducing Santa. You use fun playful uninhibited expressions to refer to many recognizable aspects of the holiday (stale ole fruity-tootie cake) . . . all the while hinting at wanting something quite different to pump up the fun of the season! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

Thanks Margie so much..glad you enjoyed .time to.forget the fruiity fruity stale cake..lets pop the .. read more
barleygirl

1 Year Ago

My facebook profile pic is a piggie illustration toasting a stem glass full of . . . just so's you k.. read more
Here's another guy that hopes you get your wish this year... Have a good un Fran.. N:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

Thanks for reading and your words Neville..
Neville

1 Year Ago

my seasonal pleasure.. :)
Wonderful and hopeful words shared dear Fran.
" Darlin',you're all i want for Christmas
and he better bring you to me come Christmas nite!"
A perfect wish above. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

Thanks John, for reading and your reviews I'm my poetry..
Merry Christmas
I hope after this humorous seasonal re-write Ole St Nick has delivered as requested - it has been three years! If not - perhaps get 'Amazon' to rewrap and deliver - Merry Christmas ... :-)

Posted 1 Year Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

Thanks Phil..for reading this 10 year old poem..I probably should re write it but there are just too.. read more
A perfect poem to read on a wet and windy day... your words have turned on a light! As for that Santa, he can't always be trusted these days!

'He brings me silly things - like gadgets needin battries' all the time - and flannel jammies, and woolen socks - a itchin' they drives me out of my mind.'

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thanks Emma, for reading my Ky. hillbilly poem..glad it brightened your day..
Fingers crossed he gets it right this year Fran. I will just be happy if he takes the hint that musical socks have no place in my life :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Oh no, musical socks..Egads..lol..thanks for reading and the review..
That was very fun, festive and sweet... love is the best give of all for any occasion.

Posted 8 Years Ago


GOOD ONE!
Merry Christmas

Posted 8 Years Ago


LOl. Cute. You brought a smile to my face. Love it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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