Heart, Soul and Mind

 

oddquain butterfly ~
 
Heart
filled with love
deep feelings emerge
for you,which lies within my
Soul
and flies free to embrace you
once grounded by fear
known by my
Mind
 

Reviews

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great form..well writen

[Robert Francis Callaci]

Love the cinquain variation- an ethereal quality to this piece-quite lovely....


my warmest
bob

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wonderful, great use of the butterfly emerging to describe how the heart soul and mind develop.

[deeps]

This is so beautiful, I like this alot, like the form too

[EmpressPoetess]

Beautiful! Deep. unique form gives this it's charming quality! outstanding job, Fran!

[Taylor H]

This was beautiful. I love how short it was and I love how you took the words in the middle and made it the title.