An Angel Fell

An Angel Fell

A Poem by Fran Marie

 

 

 




The dark power I have been following
  has become a reality,
not just shadows wavering in night's wind
  directly from the pits of hell,
 it beckons to me
   no reluctance have I, a good angel fell
 
into it's deadly sin
  this power has consumed out of control
I am now one with the dark night
   as sadly I begin
to feel its deadlock might
  with its sinister shackles 'pon my soul

 

O' how long in darkness must I dwell

  with my mind in sullen shadows cast

to relive a nightmare

  in this god-forsaken hell

an evil neverending task

   filling my soul with black despair

 

 


 

 

© 2010 Fran Marie


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Great imagery! It flows well and it's a place I don't want to be, Fran. Great job!

Posted 3 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

Thanks, Bárbara, I agree, not a good place at all...
Very cool. A well done dark piece of fantasy. I liked this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

6 Years Ago

thanks so very much;
I love the picture added! It made the poem have a greater effect. This was a very deep poem!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

6 Years Ago

thanks for all the comments on my poems;
O' the pool never empties,the school never changes,here comes the heard again.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Photo made the words come alive. i like the description an the dark story. Easy to fall into hell. Very difficult to be release from the prison. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love how you inserted a picture. Great poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is amazing. i love the last stanza. i've been there before & am still trying to get out. a darkly beautiful write! going in my favorites.

Posted 10 Years Ago


the imagery in this piece is very dark and the flow is perfect.... overall a very good write....

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

an excellent poem, disturbingly dark, but in a way that pulls you in. I agree with the others in much about this. I appreciate you entering this into my contest, this is the best dark piece i have ever read, if not the best piece period.

amazing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow. Wonderful choice for submission in my contest. Thanks much!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Paris, KY



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