`Ragdoll Puppet`

 I know you're out there
I can feel it in the midnight rain
 a stranger in a raincoat
a face without a name
 
I see you standing on the corner
 from my window late at night
and when I look again
 you disappear into thin air
and fade out of my sight
 
 I feel connected like a puppet on a string
a ragdoll mystery breathing in the wind
 your aura caresses my very being
and once again a dead heart sings
 
I taste your sweet sweet essence
 savoring it in my soul
a strange and eerie presence
 suddenly takes control
  
 I see you in my dreams
we dance and stir the stars
 lovers so it seems
we already are
 
I feel as though I'm waiting
 for you to hear my call
amid a midnight misty rain
 from this puppet ragdoll
that I may know your name.
 
     yes,I know you're out there
 
 
 

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Fran you really know how to bring out the dark side in us all with these chilling writes... you could put a book together of stories and poems to make a Ghoulish Halloween.

I taste your sweet sweet essence
savoring it in my soul
a strange and eerie presence
suddenly takes control

I really love that verse.

[Lil Guppy]

This was a fantastic write! It was so vivid and just... you just really left me speechless. I loved this!

[Fran Marie]

thanks so very much;

[Kim's Poems]

This is quite an amazing write, i enjoyed this

[rae52]

i loved it

[Lively]

Awesome rhyming scheme and very well written...

[Lourisa]

Excellent poem! You have done such a great job with creating the mood. Love it!

[Just Brooke]

Creepy but beautiful! I loved the imagery in this.

[fillingthev0id]

I like this, It's kind of like you know the perfect man is out there lol

[Trevor]

Truly extraordinary!!! I'm waiting too............ and you pulled the words right out of my mouth :P

[Marie Harrison]

I loved this writing! Very interesting. The picture was perfect too. Makes me want to sleep with my bathroom light on.

[xlovehatealicex]

wow.
this is really awesome.i love it.
i love the way its so obscure and yet clearly simple.