`Ragdoll Puppet`

`Ragdoll Puppet`

A Poem by Fran Marie


 I know you're out there
I can feel it in the midnight rain
 a stranger in a raincoat
a face without a name
 
I see you standing on the corner
 from my window late at night
and when I look again
 you disappear into thin air
and fade out of my sight
 
 I feel connected like a puppet on a string
a ragdoll mystery breathing in the wind
 your aura caresses my very being
and once again a dead heart sings
 
I taste your sweet sweet essence
 savoring it in my soul
a strange and eerie presence
 suddenly takes control
  
 I see you in my dreams
we dance and stir the stars
 lovers so it seems
we already are
 
I feel as though I'm waiting
 for you to hear my call
amid a midnight misty rain
 from this puppet ragdoll
that I may know your name.
 
     yes,I know you're out there
 
 
 

© 2011 Fran Marie


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Fran you really know how to bring out the dark side in us all with these chilling writes... you could put a book together of stories and poems to make a Ghoulish Halloween.

I taste your sweet sweet essence
savoring it in my soul
a strange and eerie presence
suddenly takes control

I really love that verse.

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.



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haunting....

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Love this write Fran, as it gently picks me up and takes me on a ride of the imagination.
Beautiful visual enclosed in these gentle words of love! Very nice my friend! ~ Jude :-) xo

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love the rhyming and the usage of ur words
I love this part "I see you standing on the corner
from my window late at night
and when I look again
you disappear into thin air
and fade out of my sight" its beautiful 4 some reason it gets to me good job

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Fran this was a power house! I so loved the puppet effect.. Kind of gave the chills and deep darkness to it all but in such a cool way that grabbed you and brought you into your words. Well done my friend. Well done indeed!!! I agree. You have what it takes to make some great books here..

Mag xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Fran you really know how to bring out the dark side in us all with these chilling writes... you could put a book together of stories and poems to make a Ghoulish Halloween.

I taste your sweet sweet essence
savoring it in my soul
a strange and eerie presence
suddenly takes control

I really love that verse.

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Whoa! Fran! This is creepy but very enjoyable
I really like this alot.
Such a wonderful write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

very cool piece ... kindy of a creepy effect but a dark thought provoking piece to me too... overall i liked this alot and thought you did a great job on this!!! fav lines.... I feel connected like a puppet on a string
a ragdoll mystery breathing in the wind
your aura caresses my very being... very nice!!!
and once again a dead heart sings

................... cool title and pic with this piece too!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

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