Dreamland Fantasy

 

I saunter through a dreamland fantasy
 in steamy waters of ecstacy
      my heartbeat quickens
        my pulse races
          In an amber moon your face I see
 
          
 
A sudden rush of pleasure enchants me
   as a soft night breeze gently flows
      palm trees sway
        a free spirit plays
            In a midnight dream you call to me
 
 
 
Shades of white mixes into desire
   as a red-hot flame inside me glows
    for I am woman
       I need no reason
              for my lust and love to show
 
 
 
I inhale the scent of your flesh
     as I undress you from head to toe
         for you are man
           you need not understand
               for this fantasy to grow
 
 
 
I sense the beauty in all its charm
  I'm entranced by a wondrous dream
    come wrap yourself around me
       I'll savor your every touch
               loverman of my dreamland fantasy
     
     

       

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Lol...I have been reading you for so long, Fran, that I knew it was your voice even before I saw the author's name. How cool is that? The night, the moon all contribute to the theme of fantasy. It is beautifully laid out with just enough romance, lust and intrigue. Kudos!

[Fran Marie]

thanks so much, Brie, lol, that is too cool indeed;

[Jibey]

Is this the stuff of dreams?! It was good to read this romantic take on a woman's longings... and what man would not wish to be undressed by such a poetess? Arousing, charming, dreamily pleasurable

[ANM]

We all have our fantasies you depicted this one perfectly! Personally I like your dark writings better!

[Fran Marie]

7hanks ANM i try to write on a variety of topics ....all dark and no sway isn't any fun lol:)

[ANM]

Ah yes you are quite right we all need some fun!

[Janey Lou]

Beautiful x

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Lots of electricity and tension here. I can only hope my Wife feels the same way.
Nice...and HOT.

[Poetic Beauty]

this is sensual and beautiful. It is hot and tastefully done. The picture suits your words well and there are many lines that stand out making the poem great as a whole.

[Matthew Kult]

I am afraid I am only going to repeat what many have already said Fran, but this was deliciously seductive and sexually sweet.

Matthew

[Lorraine]

It surely is seduction in its most elegant form. The tone is one of pure bliss and the atmosphere depicts a dreamlike escapade. You create imagery so vivid and real that the words seem to be gliding over the screen. Simply magical.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Advntrscud]

wow. Incredible, mostly lost for words o.O
beautiful:)

[Princy]

classy, vibrant, steamy and lustful!
Wow! ;-)