`Kiss

Senryu

KISS  

your deep kiss yet light

weightless as butterfly's wings

sprung love to the stars

Reviews

[Robin]

beautiful

[Antonio Valentino]

How very lovely!

Very sweet Fran!
Antonio xx

[Wicahpi]

aw, how adoring.
Nothing like the sweetest kiss x

[Clockwork]

I think that this could be a good lead in piece to some of your more erotic work if you were ever to put a collection together. I like the cosmic sense that goes along with this poem.

[Dinesh Sairam]

Mind blowing! Toda para ti?! :) :) And yes, kisses are always mystic (Though 'mystic' doesn't always translate to 'Good' :P)

[Coyote Poetry]

Those first kisses stay with us. The few words told a compete story. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote