Release

Release

A Poem by Freak
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When will I get release?

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Every step I take
Is a step towards my imminent fate
Every breath I inhale
Is an exhale closer to my grave
Every blink of my eye
Is a look into my future
Time is unforgiving
Life is foreboding
When will I get release

© 2020 Freak


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Freak
All my stuff is weird and dark, I apologize.

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Gee
These lines read like they belong to a longer piece, perhaps a song.
Never apologize for anything you post :))

Posted 2 Days Ago


Freak

2 Days Ago

I may have to keep working on this one. I just write randomly, that came out of my head in 5 minutes.. read more
Gee

2 Days Ago

Keep at it. Right, I'm off to work, you take care young lady and keep at it. Nice to meet you :)
Freak

2 Days Ago

Nice to meet you too :)

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Added on March 27, 2020
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Tags: Fate, release, sad

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Freak
Freak

Woodstock, GA



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