Lovely.

Lovely.

A Story by Krystyna Herst
"

Don't know where the hell this came from.....

"
Lovely. I just caught you, cheating on me.
Like my life isn't bad enough.
I was attempting to have a good day.

I passed my biology exam.
Did amazing on my speech.
I was going to Human Geography, ready for my exam.

I see you, leaning on her locker
Sucking on her face like a flipping vacuum.
I squeak out a cry.

"What are you doing here?" She says.
"I thought I'd come and see my boyfriend." I counter.
He stays silent as a rock.

Meanwhile, since I was talking so loud,
People were starting to gather around us. Great.
I didn't want to attract attention.

"So....." He said.
"No, just shut up. I don't want to talk to you."
I walk away, but one word told me to go back.

"Freak."
I whipped my head back at her and asked;
"Excuse me?"

And I smacked her in the face.
"What's wrong with you?" He asked.
"Pfft. I could ask you the same damn thing."

I turned away with poise and confidence.

© 2012 Krystyna Herst


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Love it! It's a great write. But to me, it feels like it would be a short story or something.. than a poem. But anyways, I enjoyed reading this. =D
Nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice write, and you did a good job on staying strong. Keep it up.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked it, but I think it would be better as a short story or even a book.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Krystyna Herst
Krystyna Herst

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