Relationships…in seventeen syllables

Relationships…in seventeen syllables

A Poem by Freedom Jurnee
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Haiku from my blog http://haikubyjoy.wordpress.com/

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You know I love you

Sometimes I don’t like you though

But that’s just sometimes

© 2012 Freedom Jurnee


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This poem made me chuckle. The way you constructed the simple lines is extremely easy to read, the meaning perfectly clear. Which, to me, makes it a successful communication. This is my 'knee jerk' reaction which is about all you'll get from me because I'm just a simple person (I get knee jerks all the time for various reasons).

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Perfect description of relationships.
-Courage

Posted 8 Years Ago


Thank you for your review, I really appreciate your feedback!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This poem made me chuckle. The way you constructed the simple lines is extremely easy to read, the meaning perfectly clear. Which, to me, makes it a successful communication. This is my 'knee jerk' reaction which is about all you'll get from me because I'm just a simple person (I get knee jerks all the time for various reasons).

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 13, 2012
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Freedom Jurnee
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My name is Freedom Jurnee. I am a family woman first. A wife (with a wonderful husband), A mother (with the best children in the world). I am a writer for several blogs, an author of great works you h.. more..

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