I... Mage of Rage

Sometimes the best way to deal with pain, is to write.

I come with rage while I write my pains on a page.

Like a Mage I engage in battle.

My enemies I rattle playing with their minds like mental scrabble.

I seek mental revolution, so stop the bull s**t and confusion. Life is but an illusion!

Life is not more, but a dream. Thoughts of lost memories rarely seen.

This mental starvation leads to one final equation, this is why war becomes temptation...

 

So with rage I write my pains on this page,

spitting flames like the words of a Mage.

Burning up those dumbfound and bound by ignorance.

To ignore at first glance, is to ignore our one chance.

This is why with flames and words I dance…

 

For within my words of rage you will see.

This I am meant to be, meant to become for I am of this land that burns under the sun.

Manipulated by the almighty hand that wants me to run!

Rage… Rage… Rage and anger heats my soul.

Rage growing stronger, on my mind takes its toll.

Rage blinds me! As I burn away what was once whole...

So I run with this rage while all burns... Burning...

Twisting and turning within this heated chaos I yearn to survive. To arrive...

I now must rise from these ashes...

But can I?

Will I?

 

Will I survive, can I rise?

Can I survive this rage that burns so deep inside?

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems, what do you think of the dialogue, etc.

Reviews

[Aria]

I like the contrast between the beginning and the end. The piece is great. I love the way you speak and the subject matter. I think every one should be reading this. On a technical standpoint, I think that the color scheme should have been left to a minimum. I think the words themselves do enough to capture the heat and the calm of the story. No need for font colors. And the bolding of the word rage is unnecessary to me. With everything else you say, the word stands out on its own, no need to enhance it. EIther way, great write.

[Nautili]

Hi,Santos. this reminds me of Muhammed Ali's poetry, fighter poetry, with the same feel and flow.Intense, passionate, I liked it. But what is a mage?magii?magician?

[jen]

i understand about writing to work through a place of emotion ... i really like this a lot ... some, because i identify with a lot of it
"Within this heated chaos I yearn to survive all these twist and turns�" -really loved this because sometimes i don't feel like i am always in the driver's seat where my emotions are concerned..

thank you for sharing this.. i hope calmness found you :)

[just is]

Rage� Rage� Rage and anger heats my soul�.
Rage growing stronger on my mind takes its toll�
Rage blinds me as I burn away what was once whole.

Love this write, this is wonderful, like everything about it. it's well put together.