Night Rainbow

Night Rainbow

A Poem by Marie

You are
the beautiful rainbow
which spans the dark sky
of my life
In colours iridescent
you light up
the neon sign
in my heart
which says
I Love You! 

© 2024 Marie


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Dear Marie, you have sprinkled a unique colours pattern over the descending dark of the night, this imagery is beautiful, the idea of your short poem being so lovesick and it says a lot, sweet and lovely, the colours spreading over the heart resembling the night sky makes for a beautiful sensation! Really loved this sweet poem, my friend, so glad to read this delight!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Month Ago

Thank you so very much, dear P.V. for your very kind and encouraging comment. I am so pleased you li.. read more
Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

I'm always happy to read you my friend! You're most welcome. Wishing you a beautiful day ahead ❤�.. read more
Marie

1 Month Ago

I am always more than happy to read your beautiful poems also, dear P.V. Wishing you a very lovely e.. read more



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Such a sweet and sentimental poem, dear Marie.
I loved the Neon sign in rainbow colors.
Love is like that. So dreamy, dazzling and bright.
There's earnestness, sincerity, and such fervor in your words.
Saying "I Love You' like you do here, tops everything else in the world.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Month Ago

Thank you for kindly reading, dear Divya and for your lovely review. Wishing you a very lovely eveni.. read more
DIVYA

1 Month Ago

And you too,dear Marie.
Have a lovely day!
🙋‍♀️💕
Marie

1 Month Ago

Thank you, dear Divya. I too, wish you a very lovely, blessed and happy day to enjoy 🌹♥️🌹
Ooh this is Fabulous Marie, so imaginative - the contrast between the colourful Rainbow and the darkness. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Month Ago

Dear red93 thank you so very much for kindly reading and for your most kind comment. Wishing you a v.. read more
Dear Marie, you have sprinkled a unique colours pattern over the descending dark of the night, this imagery is beautiful, the idea of your short poem being so lovesick and it says a lot, sweet and lovely, the colours spreading over the heart resembling the night sky makes for a beautiful sensation! Really loved this sweet poem, my friend, so glad to read this delight!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Month Ago

Thank you so very much, dear P.V. for your very kind and encouraging comment. I am so pleased you li.. read more
Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

I'm always happy to read you my friend! You're most welcome. Wishing you a beautiful day ahead ❤�.. read more
Marie

1 Month Ago

I am always more than happy to read your beautiful poems also, dear P.V. Wishing you a very lovely e.. read more
Obviously this one was intended for someone close, someone who has given much meaning to the speaker's life. If it is not a spouse, it's someone who has fulfilled many of the duties of that office.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Month Ago

This poem came from my imagination having seen the most beautiful rainbow during the day, I consider.. read more
This is very heartfelt to read, Marie. You've expressed yourself in not only an intelligent way, but a way in which your sentiments cannot be mistaken. Often times, the simplest expressions are the best. :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Month Ago

Thank you so very much for reading and for your very encouraging comment, dear R. It is so true that.. read more
Oh my goodness. This is so cute! I love it. Great work.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Month Ago

Hello Alira and thank you for kindly reading my poem and for your very encouraging comment...
Alira

1 Month Ago

Of course! Keep on writing, my friend.
Marie

1 Month Ago

Thank you so very much, dear friend Alira...
Wow. I love this poem written from heart. Great

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Month Ago

Thank you T.P. for kindly reading and for your very kind comment...
Arundass TP

1 Month Ago

Welcome friend 😊
Sweet. More than that. Perfectly done. Truly beautiful.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Month Ago

Thank you for kindly reading and for your very encouraging comment, Thomas...
well i couldn't think of a nicer thing to be :0 If only that was written for me:)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Month Ago

Robert, thank you for kindly reading and commenting...

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Added on June 11, 2024
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