Our Dream Came True.

A Poem by Marie

Our little white cottage overlooks ‘The Sea of Love’.

Behind it distant hills

and a blanket of night stars above.

Our beach is golden. Crested waves lap the shore.

Seagulls cry, soaring high,

the area is bathed in legends and old folklore.

Our home is our little palace.

Your chair your golden throne and

a tall stemmed glass your chalice.

The golden sun your crown.

Together we’re divinely happy,

reaping all the seeds of love we’ve sown.

Our days and nights are filled with love,

crammed full of happiness and joy.

The most special gifts, bestowed by God above.

This is where we want to be, so true.

Together forever,

just us two!

© 2024 Marie

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Soren

The first stanza sets the tone. It is almost a bedroom in and of itself. With a blanket and a sea of love It is quite romantic. The second stanza adds to the first with coziness And history. It serves as a bridge to the third stanza that is more fanciful in the portrayal of a king With throne and chalice. this is followed in the next stanza with a crown And the issue of divinity is introduced. Is this issue of divinity that finishes the poem with us being repaid for our deeds and being eternally happy and joyful. Very nicely written.

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Thank you for reading, for your review and for your very kind words, Soren...

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Abhilash Hegde

This is a sweet romantic piece. Nice imagery and you paint a very real scene coming to life with your words. The moments you spend with your loved one and be it any place it makes it memorable and worth remembering. This is a dream that needs to come true. Thanks Marie for sharing.

Posted 5 Days Ago

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5 Days Ago

Thank you so v-e-r-y much for reading and for your very kind words, Abhi. Wishing you a very lovely .. read more

Amy R

What a dreamy poem,
Something I live for, a romance that is overflowing of whimsical vibes ..

This poem utilizes romantic and idyllic language, with words such as "cottage," "golden," "throne," and "chalice," which evoke a sense of warmth and nobility. Carries a very serene atmosphere to..

I love the imagery, so rich and to die for...royalty like.

MAGNIFICENT POEM.
-Amy