Betrayed By Love.

Betrayed By Love.

A Poem by Marie

Betrayed by love, I shiver inside
my heart's turned to stone,
I have nowhere to hide.


Betrayed by love, tears well up inside
and tumble down
I have no pride.


Betrayed by love, my mind is confused
How could this happen
when two hearts were fused?


Betrayed by love, no ring now I wear.
Gone is the joy
the love and the care.


Betrayed by love, I shall love no more.
A wall I have built
and my heart's locked the door!


© 2024 Marie


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Beatiful Marie, this works really well on many levels. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

5 Days Ago

Thank you for reading and commenting, red93...
Boy can love be wonderful and biting at the same time. What a great poem, thank you for sharing. What was the inspiration?

Posted 6 Days Ago


Marie

6 Days Ago

It isn't love that bites, Dave! It is the human being to whom we give our love. Love is healing when.. read more
A very sad piece, Betrayed by love made it very poignant,
No pain is deeper than the ones inflicted by loved ones,
A heartfelt piece

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 28, 2024
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Marie
Marie

Kerry, Ireland



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November. November.

A Poem by Marie