You Are The Spark.

You Are The Spark.

A Poem by Marie

You are the spark,

 

the flame

 

and

 

the fire.

 

You are the heat

 

and my

 

burning desire.

 

You are the music

 

which

 

flows to my heart,

 

making me love

 

you

 

each moment

 

we are

 

apart!

 

 


© 2024 Marie


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this will make a great rock ballad. it's straight to the point and full of passion. alas, i cannot relate to these lyrics at all for all my love affairs were brief and ended in disaster. but i have fallen in love before, and i wish from the bottom of my heart that i could one day tell that person something like this.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

4 Weeks Ago

Thank you so very much for reading and for your very kind words, Ern M. We never know when love will.. read more



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It is always awesome when we find that spark, great poem.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Marie

4 Weeks Ago

Thank you for reading and for your kind words, Dave...
There is an old saying to the effect that absence makes the heart grow fonder. This one, though, sounds like a full time fondness.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

4 Weeks Ago

Thank you for kindly reading and commenting, dear J. B...
Even apart the desire still burns with intensity such is love here, strong, passionate and so hot!

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

4 Weeks Ago

Hello Tom and thank you so very much for taking time out to read and comment and for your so kind wo.. read more
I love this, so very fiery and passionate. Love again, the thing that really drives me wild.
Thank u for sharing such a beautiful poem.... Simple yet so sweet!!! ❤❤
-Amy

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

4 Weeks Ago

Thank you so very much for so kindly taking time out of your busy day to read and comment, Amy. I am.. read more
Amy R

4 Weeks Ago

You're welcome hon!
Keep good, hugs
Marie

4 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much, dear Amy. Hugs too, dear friend...
A beautiful episode of belongings. Nicely written poem

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Marie

4 Weeks Ago

Thank you for kindly reading and commenting, dear T. P...
this will make a great rock ballad. it's straight to the point and full of passion. alas, i cannot relate to these lyrics at all for all my love affairs were brief and ended in disaster. but i have fallen in love before, and i wish from the bottom of my heart that i could one day tell that person something like this.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

4 Weeks Ago

Thank you so very much for reading and for your very kind words, Ern M. We never know when love will.. read more
Marie this poem has a different feel to it. It runs quickly and reads easily. It is lighthearted and speaks of love very nicely done.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

4 Weeks Ago

I so appreciate you taking time out to read and comment so kindly, Soren. Gratitude, dear friend...
This spark gives numbness...
Beautiful love in the memory frame...

( I used to test this often with my beloved after reading lot of werewolf teen fiction,but who am i kidding 😅)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Month Ago

Thank you so very much for kindly taking the time to read and comment, Jeyanthi. Wishing you a very .. read more
Jeyanthi

1 Month Ago

Thank you 😀... even apart the gap is Sparkling..
You, too mam...
Have a nice day.... read more
Marie

1 Month Ago

Thank you for both your kind comment and greetings, dear Jeyanthi.
I too, wish you a very Goo.. read more

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Added on November 10, 2024
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Kerry, Ireland



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