Sweet Lover Mine.

Sweet Lover Mine.

A Poem by Marie

Lay down beside me

breathe your sweet sighs.

Gently caress me

until my heart cries

out for your kisses

and your love divine

as in your arms

I drink your sweet wine,

which flows like a river

sending ecstatic feelings

and my body a quiver

with burning desire

to taste of your love

taking us higher

to Heaven above.

In the flames of the fire

Your love takes me beyond the stars,

way past the moon lit sky

Venus even Mars!

Rock me gently in your arms

until us two become one.

Love me slowly through the night

into the day so

together we will greet the morning sun!

© 2024 Marie


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Fabulous Marie. Oh these Irish Ladies ! It all comes back to me - gorgeous sunny days in my Irish Lover's arms, in beautiful Oxford - it really seems like only yesterday. Exceptional ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

5 Days Ago

Thank you for kindly reading and commenting, dear red93. Grateful...



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What a beautiful poem, lovers clearly inlove, I love this poem so much.
"In the flames of the fire
Your love takes me Beyond the stars,
way past the moon lit sky
Venus even Mars!" Beautiful lines.

Greatly penned.
-Amy

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

2 Days Ago

Thank you so very much for your too kind words, dear Amy. Wishing you a very nice evening, dear frie.. read more
Amy R

2 Days Ago

Very welcome, dear, Marie
Marie

2 Days Ago

Thank you so very much, dear Amy...
Fabulous Marie. Oh these Irish Ladies ! It all comes back to me - gorgeous sunny days in my Irish Lover's arms, in beautiful Oxford - it really seems like only yesterday. Exceptional ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

5 Days Ago

Thank you for kindly reading and commenting, dear red93. Grateful...
What a delighfully penned love poem, yep, beyond the moon, planets and as high as the stars, wow, doesn't get any higher than that, a consummate, cosmic dalliance, touche Marie!!!

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Marie

1 Week Ago

Delighted to see you again, dear Tom. Thank you for your kind visit. Miss your beautiful poetry each.. read more
Tom

1 Week Ago

Yea Marie, cold & gloomy but heck, like ya say 'tis winter... Stay safe & cozy!
Marie

1 Week Ago

Thank you, dear Tom. You too, dear friend...
Marie, this looks like an A+ love poem, but you need to correct some typos. Do a spell check on the first word in line 2 and the first words in lines 6 and 7.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Week Ago

Thank you for your so kind words, dear J. B. and for so kindly telling me about the typo's which I w.. read more
To me, this writing is exquisite!
The beginning, passion simmering...
Lovers unite...
Partaking each of the others' deliciousness...
"Your love takes me beyond the stars"
That's farther than other planets!
What a loving testimony!
Beautiful!

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Week Ago

Glenda, thank you so very much for reading and for your so kind words. Wishing you a very nice eveni.. read more
Marie, your poem is a tender serenade of love and passion, a heartfelt ode to the deep connection between two souls. The way you weave sensuality with celestial imagery—flowing rivers, the moonlit sky, and the stars beyond—creates a dreamy, enchanting atmosphere. I adore how your words gently carry us through a night filled with burning desire and tender love, culminating in the beauty of greeting the morning sun together. It’s a beautifully romantic piece, full of warmth and devotion, a true celebration of love's sweetest moments. Absolutely stunning!

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Marie

1 Week Ago

Dear Elnnes, thank you so very much for so kindly reading this poem and for your wondrous review! My.. read more
Marie what a wonderful read, I love love poems, this poem moved me, thankyou.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Week Ago

Thank you for reading, Dave and for your kind words too...
Soft, gentle and beautiful movement of love words. I liked the need and the want of the poetry dear Marie. A hopeful and wonderful ending to the excellent poetry for love.
Coyote

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Marie

1 Week Ago

Thank you for reading and for your so kind words, dear J... Gratitude with beautiful blessings your .. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

You are welcome dear Marie.
Marie

1 Week Ago

Thank you so v-e-r-y much, dear J...
Such a flow to this. Like ripples from a pool.

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Marie

1 Week Ago

Thank you for reading Ken and for your very poetic comment, dear friend... Grateful!
We’ll wish to be held and cherished to feel the security of others arms. This poem conveys these feelings and desire for closeness, tenderness, and love very nicely written Marie.

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Marie

1 Week Ago

Thank you for reading and for delving in to find the true meaning of the poem, dear Soren. I am most.. read more

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Added on November 24, 2024
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