Divine drops

Divine drops

A Poem by Frozen Eyes
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Let your imagination run wild ;)

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One squeeze at the bulged container and,

It pours where you exactly want it.

I love the way it spreads in my mouth..

That scintillating feeling it brings

With the burst of sweetness.. and then,

A careless drop tries to escape through

The corner of my lips and roll to my chin,

And I quickly race behind it with my tongue

To lick it up and send it back to where it belongs.

Ah! That lustful moment makes me close my eyes.

I care not who's watching, I just allow my taste buds

To romance with the liquid form of divinity.

 

© 2015 Frozen Eyes


Author's Note

Frozen Eyes
If the picture doesnt explain it.. try Hershey's U'll get the expression ;)

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Very metaphorically sensual speaking write there poetess. Well done:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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5 Years Ago

:)Smilesssssssssss
Frozen Eyes

5 Years Ago

*blushes with a grin*
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5 Years Ago

Well I think that's on the other end where the blushes are lol. I sort of got that in reading.
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I knew it was either a bottle of ketchup or chocolate hahaha! An amazingly descriptive write with a strong narrator's voice guiding you through her multiple levels of bliss. Well done!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

5 Years Ago

Thank U, specially for the "multiple levels of bliss" part .. :)
So much yum! Gotta love chocolate. But I like how without the context it is nice and naughty sounding all at once. Well done!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

5 Years Ago

Thank U & cheers to chocolate :)
My imagination did run wild hehe, but I totally know the feeling when eating chocolate and a whole load of foods... haha An orgasm for my mouth! And this read was an orgasm for my mind.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Frozen Eyes

5 Years Ago

Wow that's a mind-"blowing" compliment. thank U :)
Nice write :) Very creative piece and nice pic :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Frozen Eyes

5 Years Ago

Thank U :)
And I thought I had a sweet tooth...lol
This poem is bursting at the seams with
energy. Powerful imagery. The light hearted
side of the writer turned out to be a pleasant
surprise for me.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Frozen Eyes

5 Years Ago

Wow! thank U for being surprised :)
Well penned and great description:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Frozen Eyes

5 Years Ago

Thank You :)
Beautiful writing and a crystal clear imagery combined with just the right measure of desire and sensuality.
Great job. 👍😃

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Frozen Eyes

5 Years Ago

yeah chocolate does that to me.. heheehe.. thanks for appreciating :)
Kshitij Srivastava

5 Years Ago

It does that to many...quite a flirt that thing. :p

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Added on August 4, 2015
Last Updated on August 4, 2015
Tags: Lust, Sense, Taste, Ordinary, Surprise, Ecstasy

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Frozen Eyes
Frozen Eyes

Cooch Behar, West Bengal, India



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