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Drabble

She walks with effort

the weight pressing her down.

The effort is evident,

the sweat on both her brows glistening.

Both feet covered in dirt,

a grimace on her face.

How her face might look,

no one knows.

All we see is pain.

Suddenly she staggers,

and her will falls with it.

The stage is public,

the effort is public.

The weight is so heavy  

and more things start to fall.

This effort is futile,

it looks like she might succumb to it all.

Author's Note

What do you make of the words?

Reviews

[XxXCherriXxX]

its a very good write.
:)
i loved it

[Yosef]

reads fine to me. short & simple. fine job.