Dancer in  the dark

Dancer in the dark

A Poem by GDmonster

She moves in the shadows so gracefully and full of death 

She expressed the language of her body; the language of her soul.

 

Not any Fear in her eyes, even though a white cloth was wrapped around them

She did not have to see beauty; beauty was not physical visage that is plastered upon something or someone

 

A cold steel blade came within inches of her neck, the wielder not having any remorse

The dagger was removed, collapsing in full force

 

As the Ripper of a man disappeared within the shadows he creeped

The dancer laid on the floor now in eternal sleep

© 2013 GDmonster


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 GDmonster
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Oh wow, the dance was torture wasn't it? I feel like you described something so brutal with something so beautiful. i hope it was from her point of view. that way her death could just be one act in the musical of her life. it would be a peaceful thought to die with.

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Oooh! I loved it! A bit of mystery and a fantastic ending. ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Oh wow, the dance was torture wasn't it? I feel like you described something so brutal with something so beautiful. i hope it was from her point of view. that way her death could just be one act in the musical of her life. it would be a peaceful thought to die with.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Nicely written

Posted 7 Years Ago


So I had to check out dome more of your work and you do not disappoint, well written and delightfully dark, without being depressing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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 GDmonster

7 Years Ago

Thank you :0 glad you think so
This is awesome. Great imagery. Yew guys did great!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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 GDmonster

7 Years Ago

Yay thank-you!
Kitten

7 Years Ago

:D
awesome poem i like it

Posted 7 Years Ago


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 GDmonster

7 Years Ago

Thanks!!!! *tackels the wolf*
Fang

7 Years Ago

np *looks at u*
I-Inspirational...I l-love it

Posted 7 Years Ago


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 GDmonster

7 Years Ago

Thanks!!!!! XD
Beautiful in the true sence of the word, the meaning of each word spun into a flowing river. nice work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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 GDmonster

7 Years Ago

Thanks, glad you think so!
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! *snaps snaps* it looks great ^-^

Posted 7 Years Ago


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 GDmonster

7 Years Ago

yesh!!!! thank you jammy!!!
Jamie Cook

7 Years Ago

lol XP thank you too dude

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Added on March 4, 2013
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Tags: dance, dark, death, dancer, beauty

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