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What you should really fear

What you should really fear

A Poem by GDmonster

Shadows in the back

Something form the past

Stalking you from afar

Knowing where you are

It gets so much nearer

Almost like in a mirror

It grabs your neck

Your friends stand back

Wondering why you just strangled your self

 

© 2013 GDmonster


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There was an eerie feel to this! I didn't expect the ending. Great write!

Posted 5 Years Ago


its fantastic, i love itf, but I think you might check the spelling of few words, besides that job well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


That was really good! Entertaining! :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

O.O Dude!...I got it! :D This was impressive Chris! Like, coool ohmygawd the ending took a bit but then Im like *mindblown* Awesome job, it was short but potent!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 GDmonster

6 Years Ago

Thanks jammy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jamie Cook

6 Years Ago

welcome!
Wow powerful and true, it strikes me right in the heart and brings me back to some of my dark days. If only I had found this poem then. Amazing job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

O.O So true though... Amazing write. ;)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow. Kinda scared me lol Which i might say is not a bad thing. I didn't except that! Great job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple. Scary. Good.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yep pretty much, nice write

(exept my friends stand there like da faqu are you waaaaaaaaaaaaay up there in the tr- s**t don't jump down from there!!!! n im like b***h please m crazy but i know my limmits XD)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 GDmonster

6 Years Ago

Lol thanks!
Wow love it. This piece is really amazing. Great write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 GDmonster

6 Years Ago

Thank-you a lot!!!

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Added on March 9, 2013
Last Updated on March 12, 2013
Tags: dark, fear, yourself, horror

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