My light

My light

A Poem by GDmonster

I’m wondering down this never ending path


Feeling only sorrow as I walk down it


Like a thorn in my heart, it poisons me to the core


I climb up this glass hill


Knowing if I fall, there will be nothing left to grab on to


I can’t even think of giving up on what’s precious to me


Or else it will be lost forever


I feel like all of this is impossible


Like theirs no way out of this twisted nightmare


But somewhere deep inside me I know if I keep walking,


That  I will reach the end that I've have been longing so much for

© 2013 GDmonster


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Very beautiful. Simple and pure skill.
Really loved it

Aphy

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

theirs or there's?

I wonder if I can read this aloud in the way you hear it behind your eyes? Our tones and pauses affect the flow and taste of the meanings, I do understand what you are saying, I just wonder if "I" could say it as well.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 GDmonster

4 Years Ago

Yea im no good writer, thankyou for your review
Chris

4 Years Ago

I did not even "suggest" about your skills as an author... but I did suggest ways you can help me to.. read more
I felt a sense of desperation while reading this. Awesome work! ^-^

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. This is very inspiring. Though the pain hurts so much, and the struggle is intense, there will be an end to it all. There's a light we aspire to. Brilliant.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You hope shines and stretches to the rainbows...Bravo...............

Posted 5 Years Ago


Reaching that is by far awesome!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Hopefulness shines through this heartbreakingly sad poem.
You are strong.
Thanks for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


Beautiful. (:

Posted 6 Years Ago


"That I will reach the end that I've have been longing so much for"

Full of positivism. I like this. Your light can bring you into the end of the race.
Nice job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


 GDmonster

6 Years Ago

thank you!

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