Fallen Angel

Fallen Angel

A Poem by Rika

I’m sorry my dear beloved but I have fallen.
So far not within anyones reach not even yours.
But you try any way, why is that?
Why do you try to reach someone so steeped in darkness?
Who has done so many horrible things.
Horrible things that have affected you and the people around me.
Things that no one would  forgive me for.
Things that I will never forget.
I just don’t understand why you try.
I don’t understand why anyone would try.
I try because you said I’m sorry the person answered.

© 2013 Rika


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Ooooohhh... Interesting. This is just too sweet.

It's like everlasting love that the other person just loves this guy no matter what, even if he DID step into the darkness. I love personas like this and it's a fact that the most beautiful stories come from loving someone who has been to the dark side but still keeps a compassionate heart.

That picture you have, I have that as my wallpaper from 4 years ago.^^

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Very powerful. :) I could really sense a lot of emotion in here... Great work!! (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was very sweet! Good write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


AWW so sweet , I loved it

Posted 10 Years Ago


i must confess that i read this because i have a write under the same title, however, there is nothing similar in our like named writes. this is powerful and resonant. very honest and cleverly penned. well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Amazing! I love the way you write! Great ! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


(: sweet poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very sweet. This is how I am when around people I care about.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very sweet and this is how i feel most of my friends feel like all the time but I will continue to try because I love them

Posted 11 Years Ago


Interesting. This is just too sweet. It is beautiful and emotional.


Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow. I think that many people can relate to this.

It is beautiful and emotional.

Incredible! 100/100 :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 18, 2012
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Tags: angle, fallen, light, dark, love, forgiveness

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