Fallen Angel

I’m sorry my dear beloved but I have fallen.
So far not within anyones reach not even yours.
But you try any way, why is that?
Why do you try to reach someone so steeped in darkness?
Who has done so many horrible things.
Horrible things that have affected you and the people around me.
Things that no one would  forgive me for.
Things that I will never forget.
I just don’t understand why you try.
I don’t understand why anyone would try.
I try because you said I’m sorry the person answered.

Reviews

[Imagine Blade]

Ooooohhh... Interesting. This is just too sweet.

It's like everlasting love that the other person just loves this guy no matter what, even if he DID step into the darkness. I love personas like this and it's a fact that the most beautiful stories come from loving someone who has been to the dark side but still keeps a compassionate heart.

That picture you have, I have that as my wallpaper from 4 years ago.^^

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

I think this really expresses a fallen angel. Nice job! I like it :)

[Tina Kline]

I'm sorry, two powerful words that can go a very long way. I like this, a rather dark poem with a bright spot of hope and caring.

[Rika]

Thanks!!!

[Tina Kline]

You're very welcome. :)

[✖Lust✖]

A real artist in words

[The Invisible Girl]

Beautifully written! Great poem! :)

[Castonovia]

Hmmmm, intrigueing... I loved it especially the ending, trying to save someone because they are sorry they've fallen, very dark yet oh so mesmerizingly beautiful :)

[MissEpic2902]

Oh my gosh this is great!!! I loved the emotion!! it reminded me of every bad boy I've ever come across while reading a book or watching one of my favorite shows!!

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Ohmygoldfish, I loves it so much! ^_^ You are a true master. *bows* Sensei.

It has this sort of dark energy, but it's also intertwined with a sort of golden whole-ness that makes your heart twist with sadness. V_V Beautiful, darling. Really and truly gorgeous.

[Sacsen Foote]

Wow this fantastic, I wrote a song on a similar subject matter. Very beautiful. It's one of those poems where you hold your breath for the last few lines. Just fantastic.

[kublakhan27]

Hauntingly beautiful...nice work^^

[Rika]

Thanks!

[kublakhan27]

No problem :)