light of an angel

light of an angel

A Poem by GDmonster

Your presence allures me
It also ensures me
That I'll be protected
Never neglected
Your wings glow white
All through the night
As you fly gracefully
I wait patiently
Because I know you will come
No matter what I have become

© 2012 GDmonster


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"That ill be protected" ...i don't know but may be i am wrong ....but i think that there should be "will"........
Your wings glow white
All through the night
As you fly gracefully
i liked the way you have described an angel...really a damn good imagination....


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Posted 8 Years Ago


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this is am-ZING very moving and inspirational! all in all great poem hun! i must say please keep it up!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love it! Great job! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Intriguing. A beautiful daydream.

100/100

~Abbey Road

Posted 7 Years Ago


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This one is really good.!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


And now I feel all peaceful and serene, brilliant poem :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


This one is so strong! lovely:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Great use of words and great use of proper and decent lines. Spoke of dreams and hopes clearly. great job

~Keep writing~

Posted 7 Years Ago


Awe that really nice GDMonster, really sweet and cute.

Posted 7 Years Ago


So very sweet. ^_^

Posted 7 Years Ago


wow, good work i like it ^^

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on April 19, 2012
Last Updated on November 10, 2012
Tags: light, angel, protect, warmth, Glow, White, Wings

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