light of an angel

Your presence allures me
It also ensures me
That I'll be protected
Never neglected
Your wings glow white
All through the night
As you fly gracefully
I wait patiently
Because I know you will come
No matter what I have become

Reviews

[The dark story]

"That ill be protected" ...i don't know but may be i am wrong ....but i think that there should be "will"........
Your wings glow white
All through the night
As you fly gracefully
i liked the way you have described an angel...really a damn good imagination....

[Howlsong]

Fantastic immagery! I read this to the pups and they love it too

[Revera Love]

So simple. So Perfect! Exactly how i feel most of the time. Mind if I memorize it and recite it to my bf? Its absoulutely perfect for how he is and how we always have been. :)

[Rika]

is it realy that good? sure go ahead

[Revera Love]

I find it is :)

[♪Barklight♪]

Nice one! ^_^

[MandaBear]

Sweet! Loved it 100000%

[Lil Guppy]

Nice rhymes. A little too much though. :)

[Kitten]

This is amazing. Very great write. ^_^ I love it!

[Luna Kusan]

Short and beautiful P-Per-Perf_perfect.

[Felecia]

Oh! Another angel poem....I like you XD You like to write about angels and I like angels! You've got another fan here 0.0 hope that doesn't creep you out XD
Anyway! enough of me and my weirdness! I loooooove this poem! Short, simple and sweet! ^.^ Well done!

[Nigaiyuki]

Even though it's short... It's very beautiful. I love it

[Castonovia]

Very ensnaringly gorgeous write... mispelled *matter* a bit, but overall shows the perfect visage of an angel, very descriptive, well penned piece indeed ;)