Dark Knight

Oh dark knight
How you shine in the moon light
In the waters you gleam
Your refection glows
But still your very soul dwells in the dark
As you stand next to the oak
In your black cloak
You look up at the night sky
At the bright stars that are up there

Author's Note

goes with this http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/GDMonster/1008869/

Reviews

[The dark story]

the title is very much different from the verses.you are describing a night(which you have done very elegantly though)but the title is referring the"KNIGHT".i didn't get the connection between them.but the poem is sorely very nice and the description is very much appreciable.nice work

[Rika]

my bad i forgot to put the k in knight

[The dark story]

oh.it's okay....:)

[Felecia]

Woot! Dark knights! Always liked dark knights and anything dark XD Buuuuuuut that's just me ahaha. don't get me wrong, I do like white nights and light and good things to you know. Anywho! Love the poem! awesome

[Khouchan]

I could really picture what you were describing in my head, I really really liked this one ^_^

[Nigaiyuki]

I think this poem of yours is absolutely great. I really love it.
To tell you the truth, just by reading it, I can see a vision of a dark night
standing right in front of me. >w

[Rika]

thanks!

[Nigaiyuki]

Welcome =wO

[Castonovia]

Sounds like Berzerker off of "Fate Zero" or even the dark paladin from "Final Fantasy." Full of good rythme and essence. Vivid, enchanting descript indeed ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

The story of the dark knight allowed us to create good story and mystery. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[RachelReaper]

I could picture the whole thing, oh, and your dark knight sounds pretty hot, and I'm not ashamed to say so. Can I have his number?

[Dominique]

I love how you interlocked your tow poems so wonderfully.

[Bluefire]

Very good. I like it. :3

[_]

And now I'm back from White Knight ^-^ !!! THAT WAS FUN!!! Sorry I was so amused by it, like another hidden surprise. Awesome poems!!!! It was fun!

[Ella]

Love this! It is so purrty! it paints a beautiful, dark picture :) Another amazing one.

[Rika]

Thanks!! :3

[Ella]

Welcome
BTW, saw something about Batman, and well... I died, at the end of this poem should just be like, "nah I am kidding guys, I'm not the Dark Knight, I'm Robbin" So not what the poem is about, but whatever xD

[Rika]

You should read white knight too

[Ella]

Send me a read request and I will when I get back Darling :)