Dark Knight

Dark Knight

A Poem by GDmonster

Oh dark knight
How you shine in the moon light
In the waters you gleam
Your refection glows
But still your very soul dwells in the dark
As you stand next to the oak
In your black cloak
You look up at the night sky
At the bright stars that are up there


© 2012 GDmonster


Author's Note

 GDmonster
goes with this http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/GDMonster/1008869/

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the title is very much different from the verses.you are describing a night(which you have done very elegantly though)but the title is referring the"KNIGHT".i didn't get the connection between them.but the poem is sorely very nice and the description is very much appreciable.nice work

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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 GDmonster

7 Years Ago

my bad i forgot to put the k in knight
The dark story

7 Years Ago

oh.it's okay....:)



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Woot! Dark knights! Always liked dark knights and anything dark XD Buuuuuuut that's just me ahaha. don't get me wrong, I do like white nights and light and good things to you know. Anywho! Love the poem! awesome

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I could really picture what you were describing in my head, I really really liked this one ^_^

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think this poem of yours is absolutely great. I really love it.
To tell you the truth, just by reading it, I can see a vision of a dark night
standing right in front of me. >w

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 GDmonster

7 Years Ago

thanks!
Nigaiyuki

7 Years Ago

Welcome =wO
Sounds like Berzerker off of "Fate Zero" or even the dark paladin from "Final Fantasy." Full of good rythme and essence. Vivid, enchanting descript indeed ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The story of the dark knight allowed us to create good story and mystery. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I could picture the whole thing, oh, and your dark knight sounds pretty hot, and I'm not ashamed to say so. Can I have his number?

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how you interlocked your tow poems so wonderfully.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very good. I like it. :3

Posted 7 Years Ago


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And now I'm back from White Knight ^-^ !!! THAT WAS FUN!!! Sorry I was so amused by it, like another hidden surprise. Awesome poems!!!! It was fun!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love this! It is so purrty! it paints a beautiful, dark picture :) Another amazing one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ella

7 Years Ago

Welcome
BTW, saw something about Batman, and well... I died, at the end of this poem should j.. read more
 GDmonster

7 Years Ago

You should read white knight too
Ella

7 Years Ago

Send me a read request and I will when I get back Darling :)

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Added on April 19, 2012
Last Updated on September 23, 2012
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