What has yet to come

What has yet to come

A Poem by GDmonster
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This dose not ryme at all but each line dose gose together in telling whats going on here.

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Broken glass imbedded in my feet

Thorns around my ankles

Castle gleaming in the moon light  

Night air chilled with fright

Engulfed in darkness

Unsure of the fate ahead

Growls of the unfair

Falling to the ground

Wishing you were there

© 2012 GDmonster


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Wow I think it really depends on how the person wants to imagine this. Which makes this a whole different dimension of fear than what you usual see. Greatly original, and well written. Thanks for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very scary and suspenseful. Great scene for a horror movie. Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Hehe when I saw the picture for the poem I though Run Forrest Run....but really this poem was pretty scary if you were in such a situation. I'd probably scream my lungs out till I passed out, lol. Yup happens all the time at amusement parks. XD

Posted 8 Years Ago


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 GDmonster

8 Years Ago

i guessed you would lol
Nicely written. :) another amazing poem :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neat... I love to mood of the poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ooooh, eerie and nice

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your always good at poems and this is so going in my libary

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it, the jagged imagery is great and the final line "wishing you were there" is great to end with.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

okay.. when i read it i feel that I AM is inside this poem (cannot explain what i fell)
this is amazing poem.. great job :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its painful and the poems defined with such beauty makes me feel chills up my spine really scary.. I don't think I can endure that much of a pain

Posted 8 Years Ago


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