My First Day Without You

This is about my first day of summer vacation a.k.a my first day without Frankie. 6/11/10

Every day I saw your smiling face.
I saw your beautiful, full lips
Spread apart to reveal a cute set of teeth.
I miss your smile already.

Your brown hair was gleaming
Due to the bright lights in class.
It looked perfect as I sat staring at it.
I miss your hair already.

Those HUGE hazel eyes bore deep into my soul
Made me catch my breath
And sent a shock that rocked my core.
I miss your eyes already.

Your hands played casually with my hair
Pulling the twist and curls
So that they would spring.
I miss your touch already.

I miss you so much it hurts.
Please, may I see you again?
I can't last a whole summer without you.
I love you most ardently.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very ardently. I like these words. These are words of a Poet. A very good poem. I like the story and the wish in the words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[aftervision]

the first day is the worst day -- i have seen it several times and still have yet to master these feelings

[Dakota]

You took the words right out of my mouth!! This is exactly what I wish I could say to my husband right now!! Great write!!

[Huggy Bear]

I fell in love with this poem. Its very sweet and beautiful:)

[Michael X]

Now that is love. powerful and well written. very emotive and passionate.

[Sam Severn]

Your poem gave me a summertime *sigh*......Beautiful! ㋡

[Becca*Type2012]

Im sorry that you can't see Frankie again, but it will get easier as summer vacation goes on