Why Can't We Do It?

Why Can't We Do It?

A Poem by Beatles9322
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The more I learn about you,
the more I realize that you
are not a holy, God-fearing man.

Yet I want you even more.
Why is that? Shouldn't a
good Christian girl want
a good Christian boy?

You are a forbidden temptation.
You are a revolutionary.
You are a dirty, messy, reckless man.
I've just got to have you.

Make sweet and passionate love to me.
Let's forget about the consequences.
Who cares about them anyway?
Let's just do it.

© 2012 Beatles9322


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Ooo, I love this too! I like the why you write poetry, I find it difficult to write poetry, so it is a pleasure to read someone else's poems which are utterly awesome. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Whoo love it! Jane's lust and instincts are overwhelmed and you captured that well!

My favourite Mr Rochester is definitely Toby Stephens :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


I understand this poem. We want to tried to tame a wild beast. Can't be done. Temptation of a forbidden desire make us jump into the fire. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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