Sweet as chocolate

I was like a chocolate
Even though I had dark sides, I was sweet
but Literally, I do have a dark side
It was what I was trying to hide
but rumors flew that I tasted sweet
You should have known I was a boy that lived in the street
I was so sweet that you couldn’t have taken me on
Feeling it, you know that the feeling was bound to end soon
Appreciating it depends on the one feeling it
So let’s talk about you, sweet? What of it?
You were someone that thought highly of me
They said that you admired me, do you agree?
If it’s true then it was so long that I appreciated you
You may have thought that it was nothing for me, think this through
I was always a guy with trust issues, you might come into my life and leave
I was not always a guy that is hard to deceive so I might believe
I won’t believe it if it’s just a rumor for I am dependent on my sense of humor
If you would have been serious about it, you should have talk to me
but then again, it matters not, the feeling won’t last long
You were one precious being that I already treated you as family all along
This feeling as you’re reading is what I made for you
Tho the feeling is not the same, I hope you’ll cherish it too
Always remember this Gorgeous, don’t make it too sweet or it won’t last long
Because even the most tasty food will lose its flavor if it's eaten daily

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Even tho your title seemed to promise something sweet & your opening mentions "sweet" in a few different ways, this poem feels anything but sweet. This narrator feels like he's pissed & he has an axe to grind. It seems like he's saying he did everything right & some lady evidently did not. This feels confrontational. This guy seems to be giving this lady a piece of his mind & it's not a pretty piece, even tho there are a few lines that may seemingly be complimentary. This is an excellent demonstration of how some people think they are very sweet but they are bitter as hell (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Gabby The GAB]

Thank you for the Review, you're sweeter than chocolate Margiee!! :D :D