Another sheet

acrostic

This sheet, I’ve seen this before, and now, I saw it yet again
Emptiness with the memories, fact-ing déjà vu
Making sure not to repeat it but it happened yet again
Part of me, just wanted to keep going but again, I was already broken
Oh well, can’t remember the last time this sheet had tears
Reflection upon repetitions, an overwhelming feeling, it’s distracting
All is well that ends we.. there was no “we”, but there was already an end
Regaining the positivity I had once, gonna be hard but still, I have to
Yesterday was history, I guess? There’s just so much to learn
Felt the pain but I’m done with it, I don’t know why was it so hard to move on
Ending it with an okay was not that okay tho
Everything was just so confusing, I felt like I was thrown away like a piece of sheet
Little by little, I’m getting used to it, It’s kinda lonely but it’s better this way
Inside this basket, full of me, full of ordinary sheets being thrown away
Nothing special, we don’t have that value, we only serve as a lesson
Getting up in the morning like where are we going? Ofcourse to a bigger trash bin
Served as a warning for others not to become like us

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I am writing a book & in one part, a person leaves another person & this is exactly what I was thinking when I wrote that, the way one person was simply throwing the other person away without a thought. I've had it done to me MANY TIMES & I've also done it to others MANY TIMES. It's a s****y feeling, but that's the way life goes. Your tone here kinda expresses that ambivalence, how it's a s****y feeling, but oh well, it happens! That makes this feel very authentic to me. It starts out a little slow & nebulous, but then you pick up intensity as you go along, revealing more & more. It feels like the narrator intends to be poetic, but then straightforward outpouring takes over! I love the natural way this feels, the way people really do spill stuff (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[gram linski]

quite a bit of sadness in this one, Gabby, but liked the sheet analogy, some great descriptions in this, cool poem

[Gabby The GAB]

yep, it's sad really hahaha thanks for the review mate!