Wishing Well

The green and blue I bend to kiss
sparkle in the deep abyss
as whispered sorrows part my lips,
please tell me there is more than this

Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work. You make the scene come alive.

[Gaia Octavia]

Thanks! Very kind of u.

[Franky]

Rich, rich content. Well done. It grabbed my attention. I normally dislike poetry! Lol

[Gaia Octavia]

Thank you! I'm glad u enjoyed it. I love short poetry.

[Franky]

Me too. And quality stuff. I really prefer short stories or books. Often, poetry is just not good in my opinion. You apparently have talent!

[Gaia Octavia]

Well, thank you. I have a hard time w short stories cuz I love falling in love w characters and they're over too soon lol

[Franky]

Oh wow. Thats so true. I agree. I love sequels for that reason!

[Gaia Octavia]

Same. Best is a series.

[Franky]

True. Sometimes years later after finishing a book I'll think fondly of those characters and actually wonder how things turned out afterward.

[Gaia Octavia]

Me too. I also rotate all my favorite books and reread one at a time while reading new books too.

[Franky]

Ive done that too. How funny. We both love books I guess.

[Gaia Octavia]

The very best.

[Emily L]

Sometimes I think simplicity is the best route to take for constructing a poem, especially in this situation. The few words you wrote conjured up a thousand emotions and told a whole story. Very lovely poem, really stick's with you and makes you think. I loved it Gaia!

[Gaia Octavia]

I am so happy you enjoyed it! I do love trying to pack large thoughts into a micropoem. There's just something that I love about the idea of big things in small packages ☺ Thank you so much!

[Emily L]

Exactly! You are very welcome:)

[Zugzwang]

A lilting piece with a sledgehammer in the tail. Nice!

[Gaia Octavia]

Thank you ☺

[emipoemi]

Short but sweet with a musicality tuned to perfection. Well done!

[Gaia Octavia]

Thank you so much!

[Namyh]

Gala Octavia - Well crafted words which drew me in like a moth to a flame. Very Nice work GO. Namyh

[Gaia Octavia]

Thanks so much ☺

[ruth]

beautiful and alluring. i was completely captured by these few words.

[Gaia Octavia]

Thank you very much 😊