I lay awake.

A bit of imagery here, you really have to read in between the lines.

I lay awake, but unconscious

Something my conscience calls conscious

I wake blind, but my visions stay 

I envision the ending of this race.

But at this pace, i stay in place.

My motivation was misplaced.

I pray that someday i actually wake,

Well i say that day is today.

Reviews

[Luna Zerimar]

I really like "My motivation was misplaced". I feel like that a lot.

[Jack...]

Very well done. I think we all face this feeling from time to time.

[Matthew Bosko]

I love the simplicity of it, you really let the words breath and I think that was in your best interest. Nice job DLG.

-Matt

[KittyVenus]

Dark yet brilliant! where did you get the idea to write this from???

[xDalliance]

I wake blind, but my visions stay
I envision the ending of this race.

Amazing lines. Dark plot and a sense of renewal. I'm a big admirer of your poems! Dark yet always teaching you something. Great job!

[Saddam]

My motivation was misplaced.
I pray that someday i actually wake,
Well i say that day is today.

Sure writing about confusion and misunderstanding.But the day is today, for act. Great write.

[Emmy]

I sure understand that feelings. I have no words!

[Emmy]

Good job!!!