I will fall

Fear coming from all directions

Can read the message on the wall

I can't hear you trying to call me

Now once and for all I fall

As my neck is bleeding

My soul is singing

I will fall

I will fall

I shall.

As my world falls to pieces

I grant my heart to you

Now you may think it's beating

My dark side may not want it true

I've fallen to evil

Trying to be a hero

I shall fall

I shall fall

I will

I will...

I will..

I will...

I smile right through depression

Darling, Don't stare into my eyes..

You think you know obsession?

It leads to your own demise...

So instead of giving me the key

You just want to feed me?

So I will fall

I will fall

With you.

Reviews

[Lin]

What an amazing poem I came across? I can feel how broken and down you feel. I know you wrote this a couple years ago, but it is an excellent poem.

[Ghost Writer]

I love your work so much ❤

[Mira]

i love it! really amazing x

[Luna Zerimar]

My, my, my.

What words you have..

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle and powerful words my friend.
"So instead of giving me the key
You just want to feed me?
So I will fall
I will fall
With you."
I liked how you led to the strong ending. The lines are true life and strong. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Valentine]

Well done and your meaning comes through. Valentine

[Celie Rose]

So expressive. You write with an eerie grace but beautiful. Well written.

[Beautiful Christmas Tre..]

its a beautiful poem. keep writing