The Thunderstorm

The Thunderstorm

A Poem by GardenDelights
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A heavy thunderstorm rages.

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Thunder releases its battle cry

as lightning slashes the dark night sky

rain drenches the sleeping land

awakening a thirsty, needy demand.

This greedy ground 

soaks up rain ravenously

...and the clouds continue to release

this downpour that does not cease 

amidst the loud violence of the night.

© 2019 GardenDelights


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Yea GD, can see those black flashing clouds and hear the earth slurrping up the torrents of rain. Not an extraneous word or phrase. Thank you, should be a nice day come morrning :) >

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you painted a lovely image with your words

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GardenDelights

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you very much!
 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

you`re welcome
GardenDelights

2 Weeks Ago

You betcha, afish!

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Added on November 18, 2019
Last Updated on November 18, 2019
Tags: Weather, Rain, Thunderstorms, Nature